We are a group of Year 7 and 8 students at St Bernadette's School in Christchurch. This is a place where we will be able to share our learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia ora St Bernadettes i really like how you have animated this slide. I also like the amazing backgrounds . and all the little stories you have done using your vision. How long did it take you to do this slide???
I like how the slide show has funky looking slides and cool pictures in it and I have learnt about the maori words.Thing is I can't see the words in the slide two.You should make the words black so people can see.
Talofa Saint Bernadette's it's Wyatt from Room 17. You have got me engaged in maori I am very impressed by your descriptive thinking. The way that you can use your mind to picture a whole new culture is amazing. You have a really rare technique at how you picture things
Hello,I liked the way you made the colour of the writing for the backgrounds,next step you should take from me is make every name on one page so it would look cool and they could write longer stories on the page,I have did something like this but not completely like it but still,why did you do these stories you could of had more information on the page as well. From Mady
Hi room 6 T thought the descriptive words you used were great. Maybe on some of them you could read back and make sure that they make sense. I have once did something similar to this before. From Jessica
Hey room 6, I really like how you did your background but next time try to make the writing bigger so we can see them because I couldn't read the 3 slide.
Kia ora Claire my name is kartell. I like how you use describing words. And cool backgrounds.
ReplyDeleteHey St Bernadettee's, I really love your descriptive words and great choice of backrounds.
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Claire my name is Jordon. I like how you use describing words and cool backgrounds.
Kia ora St Bernadettes i really like how you have animated this slide. I also like the amazing backgrounds . and all the little stories you have done using your vision. How long did it take you to do this slide???
ReplyDeletegood the caller of the writing can be in proved but very good jod very good jod .
ReplyDeleteI like how the slide show has funky looking slides
ReplyDeleteand cool pictures in it and I have learnt about
the maori words.Thing is I can't see the words in
the slide two.You should make the words black so people can see.
Talofa Saint Bernadette's it's Wyatt from Room 17.
ReplyDeleteYou have got me engaged in maori I am very impressed by your descriptive thinking. The way that you can use your mind to picture a whole new culture is amazing. You have a really rare technique at how you picture things
Hey room 6
ReplyDeleteI really liked your descriptive words.
Great work, your description was awesome!
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Hello,I liked the way you made the colour of the writing for the backgrounds,next step you should take from me is make every name on one page so it would look cool and they could write longer stories on the page,I have did something like this but not completely like it but still,why did you do these stories you could of had more information on the page as well.
ReplyDeleteFrom Mady
Hi Room six I really liked your slides that you made later on maybe you can teach me how to do that and maybe just keep it black for now
ReplyDeleteHi room 6
ReplyDeleteT thought the descriptive words you used were great. Maybe on some of them you could read back and make sure that they make sense. I have once did something similar to this before.
From Jessica
good job keep it up bye
ReplyDeleteHey room 6,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you did your background but next time try to make the writing bigger so we can see them because I couldn't read the 3 slide.