We are a group of Year 7 and 8 students at St Bernadette's School in Christchurch. This is a place where we will be able to share our learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wow Kaylas That is really cool! Next time I think you could make flow a bit better. PS do you think you could come see my blog! here is the link http://lakebrunnertheob.blogspot.co.nz
Hi Kayla my name is Kartell. This is really cool. But there is one thing you should have put in to make it better, you should have told us what you had to do and told us a bit about the story.
Hi Kayla's, This is a nice piece of work but maybe you can try to make your work a little more slow paced, so we can understand the entire piece of work.
Wow Kaylas That is really cool! Next time I think you could make flow a bit better.
ReplyDeletePS do you think you could come see my blog!
here is the link http://lakebrunnertheob.blogspot.co.nz
ReplyDeleteHi Kayla my name is Kartell. This is really cool. But there is one thing you should have put in to make it better, you should have told us what you had to do and told us a bit about the story.
Nice Work I like the way you explained the family,KEEP! IT! UP!
ReplyDeleteHi Kayla's, This is a nice piece of work but maybe you can try to make your work a little more slow paced, so we can understand the entire piece of work.
ReplyDeleteWow Kayla,
ReplyDeleteI really like your story. It's nice, Short and simple. I hope you learnt something by doing this. I hope you check out my blog.
Keep It Up !!!