We are a group of Year 7 and 8 students at St Bernadette's School in Christchurch. This is a place where we will be able to share our learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
I like how you stated all the main and important comments. Could you please tell me what an miniken eared ewe is because I am not sure. In the last box I don’t think that the sentences make sense maybe you could fix it?
That was very interesting.
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ReplyDeleteI like how you stated all the main and important comments. Could you please tell me what an miniken eared ewe is because I am not sure. In the last box I don’t think that the sentences make sense maybe you could fix it?
Alex Prince
I really like your store map it is very funny.
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