24/03/2016
Xia revenge
Xia was really smart,
But being a nerd was her part,
They laughed on how she was un~cool
Laughing~Laughing~Laughing
But soon she'll be laughing that she was never a fool
The next sun she seemed so casual
She was quiet and seemed so Fragile,
She was strange and gave others a stare
Giggling~Giggling~Giggling
Others couldn't make her whispers' clear.
The very next sun,
The fun has just begun,
Xia sent something when it was play
Chasing~Chasing~Chasing
They were chasing until the end of the day
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Hi Annabelle,I like your poem because you rhymed everything really well so when I first started to read it I went on reading it. Your poem was really good do you write poems a lot? Can you visit my blog at lakebrunnerbridgetr.blogspot.co.nz.
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ReplyDeleteHi Annabelle,Im Maddie,I really like your poem it's cool and it has rhymes in it.Have you ever done one before or is this your first.
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Hi Annabelle,I really like your poem and think the way it is written is great.What gave you the idea for this poem and how did you get so good at writing poems?
ReplyDeleteHi Annabelle, I like how Xian was being laughed at for being a nerd, but later on she got the last laugh. Where did the inspiration for this Poem come from, and when did you get good at writing poems?
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