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Monday 21 March 2016

Eden's writing

Lightning

Lightning came, we were in the house

We were quiet, quiet as a mouse

It made a roaring noise


Striking, striking


The lightning was striking

Falling down my sister's toys


Then driblets of rain came

But I tell you it wasn't the same,             

It made a noise together.


Hitting,hitting


Together it was hitting, making a shocking weather,

There we watched through the glassy window, together.

The rain splashing on the ground

Splashing on our roof making a noisy sound.


Raining,raining


The raindrops that is round

Falling, making a damp ground.


Then it was night

Everything dark no light,

Except the shining full moon


Shining,shining

Shining down, we will be in bed soon

The stars twinkling in the night

Making a bit of light.


Twinkling,twinkling

Then, there was no one in sight

But  there, was the moon, saying, " Good night"


1 comment:

  1. Hi Eden i like all the detail you put into this writing about a bad time that happened

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